The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph provides information about the
percentage
of 4 age groups of The New Zealand population between 1950 and 2050.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
percentage
of people in the 25-37 and over 65 age group decreased, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
percentage
of people in the 0-14 and 38-45 age groups went up during the given period of time.
The number of children from 0 to 14 years old was approximately 5% in 1950, Use synonyms
then
, despite some fluctuation, it reached 20% Linking Words
at the end
of the period. Linking Words
However
, the Linking Words
percentage
of young in the old from 25 to 37 was 20%, Use synonyms
then
it slightly increased by 5% in 1960 and plummeted to 0% in 2050/
The number of adults from 38 to 45 was approximately 23%, Linking Words
then
it peaked at about 50% in 1990 and went down to about 40% in 2050. Linking Words
In contrast
, the population of New Zealand in 1950 was composed of 60% elderly people over 65, Linking Words
while
in 2050 Linking Words
this
number went down to 50%.Linking Words
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