The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph provides information about the
percentage
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of 4 age groups of The New Zealand population between 1950 and 2050.
Overall
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, the
percentage
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of people in the 25-37 and over 65 age group decreased,
while
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the
percentage
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of people in the 0-14 and 38-45 age groups went up during the given period of time. The number of children from 0 to 14 years old was approximately 5% in 1950,
then
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, despite some fluctuation, it reached 20%
at the end
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of the period.
However
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, the
percentage
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of young in the old from 25 to 37 was 20%,
then
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it slightly increased by 5% in 1960 and plummeted to 0% in 2050/ The number of adults from 38 to 45 was approximately 23%,
then
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it peaked at about 50% in 1990 and went down to about 40% in 2050.
In contrast
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, the population of New Zealand in 1950 was composed of 60% elderly people over 65,
while
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in 2050
this
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number went down to 50%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • steady increase
  • fluctuations
  • notable rise
  • projection
  • stabilization
  • plateauing
  • growth rate
  • population growth
  • timeline
  • trend
  • segment
  • economic conditions
  • migration policies
  • birth rates
  • data series
  • historical
  • forecast
  • intervals
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