The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

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the proportion of recycled materials

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1982 to 2010. The biggest proportion is the paper, in 1982 it was

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65 more or less, and in 2010 it was

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70. The smallest amount is plastics which started in 1990 with less

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to almost 10. Paper & cardboard had a

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1994, after that increase it has slowly decreased. The glass had a decreased sense 1982, till 1990.

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it to 45 per cent, with no decreases.

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that aluminium

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getting more popularity, and

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making more progress in the

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recycling

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proportion
recycled
materials
percentage
paper and cardboard
glass
plastic
metal
stable
noticeable
rise
significant increase
accounting for
consistent
ste steadily
dramatically
nearly
worth noting
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The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

Technology is being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences Discuss both sides of this argument and then give you own opinion.

Nowadays most of the crimes are done by youngsters what are the causes of this and what solutions can be taken??

You have a problem with a recently hired employee in your workplace. Write a letter to the HR manager. In your letter describe the problem the new employee has caused explain how other colleagues feel about the new employee's conduct say how you expect the manager to address the situation.

Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both theese attitudes and give your own opinion.

Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions. What are the primary causes of the quality in life? What solutions can you suggest to improve the quality in life?