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The charts bellow show the proportions of british students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

The charts bellow show the proportions of british students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.
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The chart illustrates the proportion of
students
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 in a specific school in England that spoke another
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lenguage
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language
 apart
of
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 English in two different years.
Overall
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, we can see that in 2000 just
a
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20% of the
undergraduate
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undergraduates
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 did not know
other
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another
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languages
language
.
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, a big part of them knew Spanish, and
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the
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15% of those
students
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 who knew French, and another 15% were those who spoke another
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lenguage
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language
.
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,
in
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this
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 year, the minority were the
students
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 who knew how to speak German and two other
tongue
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.
On the other hand
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, in 2010 the statistics changed, as the number of undergraduates who spoke Spanish and another
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lenguage
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language
 increased, but in the blue and orange
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 the numbers decreased.
Furthermore
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, the amount of
students
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 who spoke two other
lenguages
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languages
 did not
changed
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change
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 in both years. After taking all the details, we can conclude that in both years most of the
students
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 knew how to speak another tongue apart
of
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 English.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, lenguage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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