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The diagram shows the consumption of renewable energy in the USA from 1949-2008. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer identifying the main trends and making comparisons where relevant

The diagram shows the consumption of renewable energy in the USA from 1949-2008. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer identifying the main trends and making comparisons where relevant
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The charts below depict the usage of Renewable
Energy
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 in the USA at the time
period
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 of 1949 to 2008.
Overall
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, the
consumption
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 increased significantly, more than two times
at the end
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 of 2008. The
wood
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 and hydroelectric power
were
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fluctuated during the
period
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 of time,
while
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 the
wind
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 and biofuels remained flat but increased significantly
at the end
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 of the
period
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. For the first 25
years
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, the
consumption
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 of
wood
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 was stable
then
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 increased significantly in 1975 and reached
at
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its peak in 1985 with 2.3
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Quadrilliun
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Quadrillion
Btu
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.
The
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In the
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 following
years
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, the
wood
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energy
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continue
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continued
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decreased
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to decrease
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 until 2008.
The hydroelectric
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Hydroelectric
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 power
also
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 showed
similar
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a similar
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 pattern
with
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to
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wood
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energy
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. For the first ten
years
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, the number
consumption
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 was stable and continued to increase since 1960. In 1985, hydroelectric power
also
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 reached
at
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apply
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its peak with
total
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a total
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consumption
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around
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of around
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 3
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Quadrilliun
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Quadrillion
Btu
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 and after that, it continued to fluctuate with the down pattern.
The biofuels
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Biofuels
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 and
wind
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energy
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start
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started
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 to be consumed in 1980. For almost 20
years
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the
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wind
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 and biofuel utilization remained flat, but in 2000 these usage
start
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started
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 to increase drastically.
At the end
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 of
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period
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the period
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, the number of biofuels reached around one
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Quadrilliun
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Quadrillion
Btu
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while
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 the
wind
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energy
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 was only 0.5 
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Quadrilliun
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Quadrillion
 
Btu
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, at the end, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, period, consumption, wood, wind, years, quadrilliun, btu with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption trend
  • renewable energy
  • stagnant level
  • increase in consumption
  • energy policy
  • technological advancements
  • fluctuations
  • public and governmental support
  • cleaner energy sources
  • economic factors
  • policy changes
  • peak consumption
  • significant improvement
  • shift
  • dips or slowdowns
  • economic recessions
  • governmental policy
  • investments
  • timeline
  • comparative analysis
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