The bar chart shows the percentages of the Canadian workforce in five major industries in 1850 and 2020.

The bar chart shows the percentages of the Canadian workforce in five major industries in 1850 and 2020.
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The bar chart compares the proportion of
workforce
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in Canada in five different industries between 1850 and 2020.
Overall
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, the services had the largest number of
workforce
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in both years,
while
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the energy and water had the smallest number throughout the period.
On the other hand
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, manufacturing had the highest contribution to
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the workforce
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in 1850 (36%),
whereas
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energy and water had the lowest percentage of
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in 1850 (3%). The services stood second with 33% and had the lowest proportion in 1850. Agriculture and fishing were higher than construction, with the former standing at 22% in 1850.
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, manufacturing, agriculture and fishing, and energy and water had a decline to approximately 10%, 1% and 1%
at the end
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of the period.
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, the services soared significantly to just over 81% in 2020 and
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, the construction had a small rise from 5% to 8%
at the end
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of the year.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words workforce with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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