The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagrams show differences in

Use synonyms

town

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the town

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of Westley now and back in 1815.

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, several changes

has

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have

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happened throughout

years

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the years

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, the

town

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has gotten more urbanized and that

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has lead

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lead

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led

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to having

less

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fewer

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green landscapes. Back in

1815

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1815,

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Westly

town

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had a single bridge that

goes

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went

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over

Twine

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the Twine

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river

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River

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, later it

got

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was

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demolished and

has been

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apply

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replaced with a railway that

also

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goes over the river and all the way towards the south until it

reaches

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reached

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the main railway station.

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Moreover

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the

town

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didn't have any entertainment locations, unlike now where many

entertainmet

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entertainment

facilities have been constructed like the museum, sports centre and the

cenima

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cinema

. Even though Westley now is a

built up

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built-up

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area it

costed

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costs

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townspeople losing

maultiple

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multiple

green spaces. Lenton

woods

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Woods

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were

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was

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gone for good and

instead

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apply

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new

estats

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estates

estate

moved across

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the

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"Lenton housing estate" which

it got

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was

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replaced by two hotels for tourists.

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, houses were replaced with two businesses and

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a residentials

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residentials

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residential

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area.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
27
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

155 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

residential area
amenities
thoroughfare
connectivity
industrial development
factory
public amenities
recreational facilities
educational facilities
residential expansion
apartment blocks
commercial activity
shopping centers
restaurants
single-family homes
development
open field
noticeable change
replacing
establishment

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