The diagram below shows the small-scale production of smoked fish.

The diagram below shows the small-scale production of smoked fish.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the small-scale production of smoked fish.
The picture depicts the process of smoked fish production
in
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on
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a small-scale
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small-scale
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small scale
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.
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, there are 8 specific steps in that production process, which commence with cutting the skin of
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fishes
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fish
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with
knife
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a knife
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and
finishes
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finish
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with
truck
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a truck
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delivery service. Moving to the details, first of all,
fishes
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are usually cut by knives and
moving
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into a big chamber with salt water for about 30 minutes.
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, we boil the chamber for 5 minutes in order to boil the
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fishes
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fish
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. After that, those
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fishes
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fish
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are moved into the big basket to be smoked. That step requires sawdust, charcoal, vat and burning to be operated and
also
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needs 30 minutes to be finished. With respect to other specific steps,
yellow-colouring
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yellow colouring
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is poured into some smoked
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fishes
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fish
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,
while
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other
fishes
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does
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not require that material. After
than
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that
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, they divided into 2 groups of Yellow-coloured smoked
fishes
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and non-coloured
fishes
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.
Finally
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, they are moved into many trucks and delivered to the customers

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words fishes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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