The Map Below shows the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided map
illustrate
the several Change the verb form
illustrates
developed
that Replace the word
developments
happend
to Willington town Correct your spelling
happened
happen
of
1780, 1860, and 2000.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, the three Linking Words
mapping
Change to a plural noun
mappings
shown
many of changing in Wrong verb form
show
this
town since in 1780 there Linking Words
are
Change the verb form
is
wide
range of woods but in 2000 the woods Add an article
a wide
are became
Change the verb form
are becoming
to
schools and spots Change preposition
apply
field
for young citizens. Fix the agreement mistake
fields
While
one thing Linking Words
Correct pronoun usage
that are
are
still Change the verb form
is
being
the same is one river through the town shown Unnecessary verb
apply
in
the right of the maps.
According Change preposition
on
in
the detail of the map, Change preposition
to
1780
there were 2 villages at the upping right corner, and 4 Change preposition
in 1780
farm
in the middle of the map near the large river, compared to the year 1860 the farm Change to a plural noun
farms
was appeared
only two farms, Change to the active voice
appeared
has appeared
Linking Words
however
the farm Add a comma
however,
was disappear
and changed to several Change the verb form
was disappeared
was disappearing
shop
Change to a plural noun
shops
instead
in 2000.
Linking Words
Eventhough
, Correct your spelling
Even
the
road had come to Willingtown since 1860 Correct word choice
though the
that are
allowed more Verb problem
it
individual
slightly more increase Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
from
100, 200, to 500 homes.Rephrase
slightly from
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 4 times.
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