The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams display a location which is considered industrial in Norbiton, and how it is going to be in the future after the developments.
Overall
, the site will be developed dramatically. Factories will be replaced with housing and there will be new facilities Linking Words
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as a school, playground, medical centre and shops.
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To begin
, all factories will be demolished and it will be replaced with apartments. Following that, new roads will connect to the intersection Linking Words
one
of them will be connected to the new bridge that goes above the river, another road will be extended until the new housing field. Use synonyms
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intersection now but there will be another Use synonyms
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which connects to Use synonyms
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Furthermore
, a school will be built in the east part of the area. Linking Words
Additionally
, there will be a playground for the kids between houses and the river. Next to the main intersection shops and a medical centre will be added. Not only that but Linking Words
also
, the farmland will be relocated in the north-east part of the area.Linking Words
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