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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart illustrates information about
yearly
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the yearly
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income
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the
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apply
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US families
by
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in
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 2007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall
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, the US individuals in 2015 earned more than the starting period, and the
number
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 of wealthy groups in the US increased significantly. At the starting period, 2007, the highest proportion of annual
income
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 of the
people
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 in the US was in the range of $100,000 or more, which is around just below 30
million
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people
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. Followed by
people
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 who
recieved
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received
 between $25,000 and $49,999 around 27
million
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people
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.
Next,
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the
people
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 earned less than $25,000 a year around 25
million
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. The second lowest
number
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 of
this
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 proportion is the
people
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 who earned around $50,000 to $74,999 at around just over 20
million
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 individuals. Families that have
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income
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an income
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 around $75,000 to 99,999
was
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were
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 the lowest
number
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of
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in
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soceity
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society
 at
around
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apply
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just below 15
million
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. In the middle period, The highest
number
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 of
the
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apply
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households earned around $25,000 to $49,999, which was around just below 30
million
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. Followed by households that earned below $25,000 at around 28
million
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people
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. The wealthy
people
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, which
recieved
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received
 over $100,000
is
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are
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 the next
number
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 at around 26
million
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. The low numbers were the two
middle range
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middle-range
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income
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,
family
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families
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 that earned
bewteen
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between
 $50,000 and $74,999 were around 22
million
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, and the lowest
number
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 was the
people
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 that got around 75,000 to 99,999, which was only 13
million
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. In 2015, wealthy
people
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 rose dramatically to around 33
million
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. the middle range group ($50,000-$74,999 and $75,000-$99,999) remain nearly
same
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the same
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 spot at
arond
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around
 22 and 15
million
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, respectively.
Low
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Low-income
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income
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 ranges (lower than $25,000 and $25,000-$49,999) were decreasing to around 23 and 28
million
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, respectively.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words income, number, people, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 15 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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