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The Map Below shows the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The Map Below shows the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 map
illustates
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illustrates
 the
urbanisatiom
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urbanisation
urbanization
 and deforestation in three different years in 1970, 1980 and 2000.
Intially
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Initially
 1970 there were huge farm
idustry
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industry
 but it
was
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dropped slightly in 1980.
Beggining
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Beginning
 of 2000
totally
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 farming was vanished from
willington
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Willington
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.
According to
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 the data 1780
this
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city
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was depends
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depended
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 on
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the agricultute
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agricultute
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agricultural
 sector. Because there were many
witness
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 of that. The north huge tree site can be seen. At that time there were 100 homes built. But the
city
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 dramatically changed in 1980 mainly
framing
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because framing
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 yield declined.
Speciall
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Special
 matter was
population
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the population
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increased
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becuse
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because
 200 homes
built
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were built
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 in that era.
Bridge
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A bridge
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was
constucted
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constructed
for
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to
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 cross the river it was not in 1760. 2000
peroid
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period
,
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city
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the city
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 was totally urbanization. 500 homes built and road facilities developed than the 1780. At that time there was one road but
2000
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in 2000
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city
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the city
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 has two roads. Not only
first
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the first
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 time two schools provide to the
city
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as well as
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, sports field both these located in
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the north
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north west
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north-west
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. Towards the south
cteate
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create
 the wetland for birds.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • infrastructure
  • surrounded by
  • transformation
  • industrialization
  • modernization
  • residential areas
  • commercial zones
  • transportation infrastructure
  • expansion
  • significant
  • comparisons
  • notable
  • impact
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