Three pie charts below shows the changes in annual spending by a particular UK schools in 1981, 1991 and 2002. Summarise the informatin by selecting and reporting the main featrures, and make comparisons where relevant.

Three pie charts below shows the changes in annual spending by a particular UK schools in 1981, 1991 and 2002. Summarise the informatin by selecting and reporting the main featrures, and make comparisons where relevant.
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There are three circular charts providing data about changes in
a year
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yearly
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expenditure in
the
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apply
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UK schools for 30 years.
Overall
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, there was a comparison in three different years
of
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1981, 1991 and 2001 when schools were spending a lot of money to cover all expenses.
Firstly
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, in 1981, 40 per cent of the cash
were
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was
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taken by the teachers as their annual wages,
however
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, another
twenty eight
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twenty-eight
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per cent went
on
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into
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other worker's
salary
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salaries
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.
Furthermore
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, resources
such
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as books spent about 15% of the capital,
while
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the
least
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lowest
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percentage of that year covered
the
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insurance and it was only 2%.
Secondly
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, after a decade, some changes occurred in 1991.
This
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can be shown
with
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by
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a decrease of approximately ten per cent
on
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in
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furnitures
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furniture
types of furniture
pieces of furniture
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and equipment which was at 15% in 1981 and lowered to 5% in 1991.
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, in both three
defferent
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different
periods, teacher's salaries got the maximum amount in annual spending of 40% and above, whilst insurance increased up to 8% in the year 2001.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Annual spending
  • Percentage
  • Proportion
  • Allocate
  • Fluctuate
  • Increase/Decrease
  • Trend
  • Expenditure
  • Category
  • Salaries
  • Furniture and equipment
  • Resources
  • Insurance
  • Notable
  • Decline
  • Growth
  • Comparison
  • Decade
  • Shift in priorities
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