The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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will be able to settle there. In conclusion,

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to have a better life. In the future, I believe that

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still be one of the

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live better.

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task achievement

Clarify and expand your main points for a clearer response. Ensure each idea fully addresses the question of science's role in improving lives.

coherence cohesion

Enhance the logical flow by organizing ideas more cohesively, connecting each main point clearly to the central argument of how science improves life.

supported main points

Include more detailed examples and explanations to support your points. Quantitative data or real-life instances can strengthen your arguments.

task achievement

The essay addresses the issue of applying science to benefit human life and considers forward-looking aspects like predicting future changes.

coherence cohesion

Both an introduction and a conclusion are present, setting the scope and summarizing the discussion effectively.

relevant specific examples

There is a good attempt to relate practical examples, such as pollution control in Thailand, to the topic, showing an understanding of real-world applications.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

323 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

crucial role
technological advancements
medical discoveries
life-changing inventions
innovations
solutions to human problems
enhancing quality of life
improvement of healthcare
transportation
communication
agriculture
energy sectors
eradication of diseases
prolongation of life expectancy
global challenges
climate change
overpopulation
food security
developed world
underprivileged communities

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