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The tables below give information about sales of fair trade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relavent.

The tables below give information about sales of fair trade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relavent.
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The table compares the
sales
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 of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in five nations in Europe in the
years
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 1999 and 2004. Units were measured in millions of
euros
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.
Overall
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, coffee
sales
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 were the highest in the
UK
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 and Denmark in 1999,
while
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 the
UK
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 had the most important
sales
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 in 2004. Switzerland ranked first in both
years
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 in terms of banana
sales
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. In terms of coffee
sales
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, Denmark had the highest
sales
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 with 1.8
million
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euros
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 in 1999 which increased slightly to 2
million
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euros
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 in 2004. The
UK
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 sold the second most important quantity in 1994 with 1.5
million
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euros
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 before dramatically jumping to the lead with 20
million
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euros
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 by 2004. Switzerland and Belgium ranked third and fourth in both
years
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 with a slight surge from 1.8 to 2 in the former, and 1 to 1.7 in the latter. Sweden had the lowest
sales
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 compared to the other countries, moderately increasing from 0.8 to 1
million
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euros
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 in 1999 and 2004, respectively. Sweden and Denmark had the lowest
sales
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 with a similar declined trend from 1.8 to 1
million
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euros
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, and from 2 to 0.9
million
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euros
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, respectively. Regarding banana
sales
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, Switzerland sold the highest amount in both
years
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, with 15
million
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euros
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 in 1999 and sharply rose to 47 in 2004. The
UK
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 and Belgium saw an increased trend, inclining from 1 to 5.5
million
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euros
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 in the former, and 0.6 to 4
million
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euros
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 in the latter, between 1999 and 2004, respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, years, euros, uk, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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