The graph below shows the number of international graduates from UK universities in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. NURASYL

The graph below shows the number of international graduates from UK universities in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. NURASYL
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The graph below demonstrates information about students from
over
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all over
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the world
which
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who
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graduates
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graduated
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from UK universities in two different years.
It is clear that
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,
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apply
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there are six universities,
such
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as,
London
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, Cardiff, Bristol, Bath,
Oxford
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and Cambridge.
Furthermore
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, in 2015
were
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there were
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more graduates than in 2000 over the period. On the one hand,
London
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university
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University
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in 2000 had 5% and it was the lowest percentage
in
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at
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that time
amond
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among
other colleagues,
however
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, in 2015 his proportion increased to 20%.
Moreover
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, Cardiff
university
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University
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grew up
also
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, but not as
London
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's, it was just 4%. In 2000, Bristol had above 6% and gradually flew up to 8%.
On the other hand
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, Bath,
Oxford
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and Cambridge improved,
nevertheless
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, they had different
number
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numbers
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of international graduates.
For instance
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,
Bath
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Bath's
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colleague soared approximately twice.
Then
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Oxford
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Oxford's
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proportion jumped from 14 to 25 and Cambridge's climbed from 15 to 23.
Overall
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,
London
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and
Oxford
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universities rose more than others

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