The graph below demonstrates information about students from
over
the world Rephrase
all over
which
Correct pronoun usage
who
graduates
from UK universities in two different years.
Wrong verb form
graduated
It is clear that
Linking Words
,
there are six universities, Remove the comma
apply
such
as, Linking Words
London
, Cardiff, Bristol, Bath, Use synonyms
Oxford
and Cambridge. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, in 2015 Linking Words
were
more graduates than in 2000 over the period.
On the one hand, Correct pronoun usage
there were
London
Use synonyms
university
in 2000 had 5% and it was the lowest percentage Capitalize word
University
in
that time Change preposition
at
amond
other colleagues, Correct your spelling
among
however
, in 2015 his proportion increased to 20%. Linking Words
Moreover
, Cardiff Linking Words
university
grew up Capitalize word
University
also
, but not as Linking Words
London
's, it was just 4%. In 2000, Bristol had above 6% and gradually flew up to 8%.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Bath, Linking Words
Oxford
and Cambridge improved, Use synonyms
nevertheless
, they had different Linking Words
number
of international graduates. Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
For instance
, Linking Words
Bath
colleague soared approximately twice. Change noun form
Bath's
Then
Linking Words
Use synonyms
Oxford
proportion jumped from 14 to 25 and Cambridge's climbed from 15 to 23. Change noun form
Oxford's
Overall
, Linking Words
London
and Use synonyms
Oxford
universities rose more than othersUse synonyms
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