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The tables below give information about sales of fair trade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relavent.

The tables below give information about sales of fair trade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relavent.
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These
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The
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 data below provides key
informations
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 about
sales
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 for
both
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of
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apply
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trade-labelled
coffe
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coffee
 and
bananas
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 in (
Uk
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the Uk
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, Switzerland,
Denemark
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Denmark
,
belgium
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Belgium
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 and
Sweden
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) in 1999 and 2004.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that all the
nations
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nation's
nations'
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sales
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goes
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go
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 higher in
both
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of
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apply
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bananas
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 and fair trade-labelled
coffe
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coffee
 except
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Sweden
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Sweden's
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 coffee
sales
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goes
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go
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lowe
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low
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 in the next year, and
both
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of
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apply
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Sweden
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 and
Denmark
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Denmark's
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bananas
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sales
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goes
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go
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 lower too.
According to
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 what is shown,
Switzerland
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Switzerland's
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bananas
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trad
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trade
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 was the highest in
both
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 years . It was 15
million
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 in 1999 and it was 47
million
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 in 2004 . Belgium was the lowest in
bananas
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sales
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 in 1999 . It was only 0.6
million
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.
Uk
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UK
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bananas
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sales
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 in 1999 was 1
million
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 and it increased to 5.5
million
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 in 2004 .
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Sweden
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Sweden's
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bananas
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sales
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was
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were
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 1.8
million
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 in 1999and it
drop
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dropped
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 in 2004
about
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to about
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 0.8
million
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 . Denemark
sales
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was
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were
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 2
million
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 in 1999
in
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apply
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bananas
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 but
then
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it
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they
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 decreased
about
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by about
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 1.1
million
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 . Coffe
sales
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in, uk
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, uk
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the UK
was
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were
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 at 1.5 in 1999,
the is
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this
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 shows so high increase in 2004, it was 20
million
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 and it was the highest in 2004 . Switzerland was the highest
is
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in
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 1999,
it's
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its
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 coffee
sales
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was
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were
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 3
million
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, and
then
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 it increased in 2004 to 5
million
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.
Denemark
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Denmark
 and Belgium
shows
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show
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 increases
in
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from
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 1999 to 2004. But
Sweden
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declin
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decline
declined
 from 1999 to 2004 about 0.2
million
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.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, both, bananas, sweden, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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