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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The supplied maps indicate interesting details regarding some future developments planned for the Norbinton industrial
area
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. Below I will highlight the main features to be restored. At first glance, it is quite evident that the marked
area
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 will be extended notably, a new road crossing the river is going to be added.
Moreover
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, many new buildings around are planned and with
this
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, a smaller roundabout to the south connects the southern street. Moving ahead, some structures from the factory
,
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 would be placed in another planned street to the northwest from the main roundabout.
The
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further
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 east, a playground
area
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 is being designated,
as well as
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 two more new outdoor spots.
Finally
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,
it is clear that
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 the total extension of the industrial
area
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 will be significantly increased, adding new facilities, moving the ones that are already there and
lastly
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, new avenues network to make more comfortable the traffic once
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arrival
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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