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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph above illustrates the number of 3
fuel
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production
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 in the UK over the 20 years, from 1981 to 2000. As can be seen from the chart, petroleum has the highest
production
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 quantity throughout the years compared to coal and natural
gas
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. Another striking fact is that natural
gas
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fuel
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 replaces coal as the second-highest
fuel
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production
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 in the latter half of the years. Petroleum and natural
gas
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fuel
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production
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 increased between 1981 and 2000, starting at around 90 and 40
energy
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units
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, respectively. Petroleum manufacturing surged sharply at the beginning before stabilizing at 140
energy
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units
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 between 1984 and 1987.
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, manufacturing plummeted to 100 in 1990 before returning to 140. As for natural
gas
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fuel
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, the graph showed a stable
production
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 quantity in the first decade,
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 consistently climbing to over 100
energy
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units
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 in 2000.
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, coal manufacturing experienced a rapid downfall from 80
energy
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units
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 to below 40 in 1984. It
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 rose slightly to above 60 in 1986 before the number decreased consistently, finishing off at 30
energy
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units
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words fuel, production, gas, energy, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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