You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him/her to the party. In your letter: •explain the reason for the party •give the date and time of the party •suggest what the classmate could bring to the party

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Dear sandy, I hope you are doing well. One of our

classmate

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is not feeling well with the environment and homesick

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the longer stay in our institution. So, I am planning to give him a surprise birthday party which will help him to calm

the

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nerves. I need your consideration and help in

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. Actually, I am planning to give the party on

21st

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the 21st

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night

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of march

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march

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since his birthday is 22nd

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of march

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march

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. I think we can start the party around

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clock

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so that It can give enough time to come for students who stay

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long distances. Sharply at 12

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we can start the cake cutting ceremony. I hope

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plan works and please give any other suggestions. I need your help in buying cake because 'Delight Bakery' cakes are the best and it is located near

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house. And

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, I need you to buy paper plates

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and soft drinks. Other

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I can arrange. I looking forward to your response Yours lovingly Santhoshkumar

ksanthosh701Mon Feb 03 2025

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Coherence and Cohesion

Make sure to check grammar and punctuation for smoother readability. For example, change '10o clock' to '10 o'clock' and 'I need your consideration and help in this.' to something more fluid like, 'I would appreciate your help with this.'

Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure the information is clearly presented in a logical sequence, such as mentioning the party details before asking for assistance.

Task Achievement

While the tone is generally warm, a few phrases could be more formal, such as using 'I would appreciate it if you could bring...' instead of 'I need your help in buying the cake.'

Task Achievement

The intention behind organizing the party is clear and shows empathy, which is great for task achievement.

Task Achievement

The letter includes all necessary details about the party, such as the date and items to bring, which is commendable.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

169 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

homesick
uplift spirits
surprise party
snacks
atmosphere
invite
cheer up
warm
celebrate
gather together

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