The chart beiow shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart beiow shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart beiow shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The following bar chart illustrates the total proportion of families who rented and owned their places in the two distinct types of countries from 1918 to 2011. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that
people
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the people
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who owned the areas increased over the period given,
however
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, the number of households
in
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rented decreased. It can be seen that there was an equivalent number in the mid-term of the graph.
According to
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the figure, households in owned accommodation was at just over 20 per
cent
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in the year 1990 to go up by almost 11
percent
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which
this
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number stayed at the same level for the next 2 decades,
peaked
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at a high of just below 70 per
cent
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in 2001 except for a small decline in the final year surveyed. As for remaining, the individuals who rented places began from approximately 78 per
cent
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to drop stably by around 47 per
cent
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in 2001,
went
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and went
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up by a mere 3 per
cent
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in the end except for an overlap in 1971.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "go up" was used 2 times.
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