You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter * introduce yourself * ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes * explain why you need to break the contract.

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Dear Sir or Madam My name

Param

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, living in one of your

flat

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flats

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Clostal Avenue. I am writing to let you know that

unfortounately

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unfortunately

, I have to end our

one year

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lease contract two months early.There is a particular reason for that I will be mentioning below. As you know

that

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, I am

leaving

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living

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far away from my family

due to

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my job. Which had

lead

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me to home sickness and became more unhealthy. I don't know cooking at all So I always manage to eat outside.

However

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, I got a

wonderfull

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wonderful

opportunity

this

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month, as I got a job very next city from my townhouse. So

this

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lead

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me to finish

this

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lease two months early. I am well aware of the contact and I know that

this

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is not the right way

end

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to end

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it. But

such

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kind of opportunity comes

ones

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once

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in a lifetime. So, I am requesting that

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you

can

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apply

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compensate

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me on

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for

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breaking the lease early and hoping there

would

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apply

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be any chance you could return

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my security deposit would be much appreciated. Yours

truley

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truly

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coherence and cohesion

Try to organize your ideas more clearly into separate paragraphs, each addressing a specific point. For example, one paragraph can focus on your introduction and request to leave, and another on your reasoning behind it.

task achievement

Double-check for spelling and grammar errors, as they can affect the clarity of your message. For instance, 'unfortounately' should be 'unfortunately', and 'contact' should be 'contract'.

task achievement

Although your tone is mostly appropriate, aim for a slightly more formal tone in a letter to an agency. Consider rephrasing certain phrases to sound more polite and formal.

task achievement

You clearly express your request to break the lease and provide a personal story to support your reasoning, which adds depth to your letter.

suitable writing tone

Your letter has a friendly and respectful tone, indicating your understanding of the situation.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

182 words

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