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As computers translate quickly and accurately, some people think that learning foreign languages is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is a common belief that learning another
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 is not worth it.
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, I am of the opinion that there
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 still
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needs
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 to use to second
language
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. It's because computers cannot read the background situations accurately, and learning a
language
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 can improve the ability to understand other
country
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's own cultures.
To begin
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 with, computers sometimes make mistakes because they can't understand the context of conversations or written sentences.
Although
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 they can translate quickly, they can misunderstand human feelings in certain circumstances. It has been proven by research conducted by Korea University that artificial intelligence makes mistakes when translating complex contexts. The result of A.I. was inaccurate because of the misunderstanding about the writer's feelings. Their mistakes are based on paradoxical expressions,
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 as sentences like 'I felt sorrow because it was fascinating'. It is too complex for computers to understand and translate it into a specific nuance.
Moreover
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, learning a
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 not only improves their verbal skills but
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 enhances their understanding of the
country
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's cultural spirit. Every
language
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 illustrates their
country
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's history, especially idioms and humour. In my case,
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, learning English helps me to know about the culture of the
British
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. I totally failed to comprehend
British
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 humour before I learned English. But now I know what they mean, why
such
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 humour originated, and the circumstances when
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 people talk about that. These experiences made it easier to understand
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 culture
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 and
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 the feeling which "fully" learning about English. In conclusion, in the field of translation, the computer cannot replace the word in regard to precise context, and people can earn precious experiences that help them improve
understanding
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their understanding
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 of foreign
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country
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. As we have seen, I apparently disagree with the given statement.

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task achievement
Ensure to clearly state your stance in the introduction and summarize it effectively in the conclusion. For example, you might want to rephrase your opinion to make it more explicit.
coherence
Make sure to link your ideas more clearly. Consider using more cohesive devices to enhance the flow of your writing. For instance, use transitional phrases between paragraphs.
content
Your examples regarding the context of language and cultural understanding are relevant and illustrate your points well.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Machine translation
  • Nuance
  • Bilingualism
  • Cognitive development
  • Global job market
  • Cross-cultural
  • Technological dependence
  • Language proficiency
  • Cultural identity
  • Authentic interactions
  • National security
  • Linguistic subtleties
  • Cultural references
  • Emotional undertones
  • Cognitive exercise
  • Mental agility
  • Travel experiences
  • Accuracy in translation
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