The bar chart shows the percentage of school children learning to play four different instruments. Zhazira.

The bar chart gives information about four different instruments that were learned by undergraduates in three time periods (2005, 2010, and 2015).

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, in the past three years, among the students apparatus like

guitar

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and

piano

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were learned more than other instruments.

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, the popularity of studying the drum and

violin

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changed slightly. In 2005, approximately 11% of schoolmates were learning to play the

guitar

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and

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,

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, the percentage

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teaching drum and

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around 7%. By 2010, educating the

guitar

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and

piano

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rapidly increased, showing the popularity among the students, with 20% and 17%, respectively. Exactly in the same year,

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the percentage

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of learning drum and

violin

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remained the same static at 5% and 7% compared to the stable in 2005. In

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2015, the number of school children schooling

guitar

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increased by 13% from the

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year, in the same

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the percentage

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of

piano

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reached

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25%. Despite the previous results of

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the drum

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,

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year the number of learners increased by 8%, but,

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for

violin

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declined to about 6%.