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Writing Samples
Band 5

Write a letter to the building manager. In your latter, -describe the noisy behavior of your neighbor, -expain how it is affecting you, -suggest a solution to this problem.

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Dear Justin, I am writing
this
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 letter to express my concern about my neighbourhood’s behaviour. I am
stephen
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Stephen
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, living in
queen’s
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Queen’s
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 apartment, door no. 5, since 2012. Recently, I have noticed my neighbour was playing songs
in
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on
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 Television with speakers during night times, which is intolerable. My kids are studying for exams and the
loudy
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loud
 noise makes the kids
to
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get distracted, which is affecting their grades.
Due to
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this
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, I politely shared my concern with my neighbour, hoping to experience peaceful nights . But, there is no positive response from them. Still, the discomfort is continuing for the past
days
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. I would greatly appreciate
,
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if
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it if
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 you
can
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 send a notice regarding
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.
Otherwise
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, could you please arrange a meeting with the family, so that I can share my concerns
to
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with
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 them in person, which may let them
to
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understand my thoughts and feelings clearly
.
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 I hope the issue will be resolved soon. Yours sincerely, NITHIYA

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coherence and cohesion
Consider restructuring your paragraphs to ensure each one contains a clear main idea.
task achievement
Try to use a more varied vocabulary for expressing your concerns to make your writing more engaging.
greeting and closing
Your letter has a clear greeting and closing, which sets a polite tone for the message.
task achievement
The letter effectively communicates your concern and personal situation.
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