You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won describe the conditions on the day say how you felt about the match

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Dear harry, I hope

this

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letter finds you in good health.I am writing

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letter to tell you about

cricket

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the cricket

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match at

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the previous

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weekend. As you know, we had

match

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a match

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last

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weekened

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weekend

.The opposite team named Silver was very strong and energetic. We missed you a lot because you are the

most

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apply

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strongest player

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our team. The competition was so stiff , and both teams were playing so

good

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well

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won

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win

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the match . We won

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match with

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lead of 44 points. The ambience of the site was warm and comfortable.People were cheering for the participant teams and enjoying.The arrangements were so good.The place was decorated with red and silver flags to motivate all participants of the teams.They offered delicious refreshments to us. I felt nervous before the

starting

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of the match because you were not playing with us. When we were celebrating our victory we took your name loudly . I hope you get well soon and cheers with us. Your loving, Aman

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure to proofread for small spelling and grammatical errors (e.g., 'last weekened' should be 'last weekend').

coherence and cohesion

Consider using more varied sentence structures to enhance the flow of your writing.

task achievement

Expand on your feelings about the match to give a deeper insight into your emotions.

coherence and cohesion

Apply better punctuation and spacing, especially after greetings and punctuation, to improve the overall presentation of the letter.

task achievement

You included a clear description of the match outcome, which shows good task achievement.

task achievement

The letter has a warm and friendly tone, which is appropriate for the context of writing to a friend.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

166 words

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