The charts below give information about the purposes of travel for passengers using four different UK airports in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below give information about the purposes of travel for passengers using four different UK airports in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts show the

percentage

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about

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the aim of travelling among passengers at four

airports

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in the UK in 2016.

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, it is clear from the charts that a large amount of passengers travel for purposes of entertainment and business in all four

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. At Gatwick airport, the individuals travelling for holidays showed the highest

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at 54%. When the rest of the

airports

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(Heathrow, Luton, Stansted) showed low and similar percentages for holiday purposes with 33%, 35%, and 36% respectively. Regarding the purpose of visiting friends and family, the Luton airport was dominating with a

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of 50% among all

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. Stansted showed a closely similar

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at 48%.

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, the lowest percentages were in Gatwick and Heathrow

airports

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at 36% and 38%, respectively. Moving to business aims of travelling all

airports

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showed similar percentages, around 14%, except Heathrow airport which had almost twice as much per cent (26%)

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, airports with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 5 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 7 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

151 words

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