In some countries, small town-center shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?
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Make sure to clearly outline your key points in the introduction and ensure that your essay fully addresses all aspects of the prompt.
coherence and cohesion
Improve the logical flow of your ideas by using linking words and phrases to guide the reader through your arguments.
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Provide specific examples to support your claims, which will enhance the credibility and depth of your arguments.
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The introduction succinctly identifies the issue and indicates that it will be discussed further in the essay.
Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
The ubiquity of advertising in today's world is undeniable, it has permeated to every aspects of our daily lives. From my perspective, eventhough it sometimes brings to us the misinformation or the exaggeration of that product, it has some advantages that help us live in the cruel global market like nowadays. I totally disagree that advertising will be banned with some following reasons below.
First, I am so overwhelmed after being a part of your birthday party last week, and sleeping in the tent and playing cards the whole night was unforgettable for me. I owe you a big thank you for everything. As usual, I was in a rush for my flight, I forgot to wear my watch. It is a black strap digital watch by Titan company and has white radium crystal in it.
In the contemporary epoch, the introduction of tech devices has greatly impacted the movie and gaming industries. In view of this, there is an irrefutable debate amongst folk that discusses whether the advantages of accessing films and games on mobile devices outruns the disadvantages. This essay would take a distinctive look at these points in the following paragraphs while I conclude with my own opinion.
When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue their education. While there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school, I would argue that it is better to go to college or university.
Opponents of shopping malls argue that they are not affordable as you can find the same products for a low cost in local stores. Whilst proponents claim that if you want to have the best shopping experience you should choose shopping malls. While both views have their own good points, I agree with a second point of view.