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bar graph presents data on how households spent their revenue weekly on 5 consumer goods in one country between the years 1968 and 2018.
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Overall
, the way families spent their weekly income had changed significantly by 2018, compared with 1968. Most notably, leisure and housing had dramatically overtaken food as the largest amount of the expenditure.
In 1968, families spent most on food, accounting for exactly 35% of their weekly income, Linking Words
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1968, the proportion of weekly income spent in any of the other categories had never ever been exceeded 10%. Change preposition
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, leisure and housing both experienced a significant upward, replacing Linking Words
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food as the largest expenses in 2018 with approximately 22% and 18% of family salary, respectively.
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rose, to roughly 14% of weekly wages, Linking Words
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the money spent on household goods had remained steady in both years at about 7%. In comparison, fuel and power, clothing and Linking Words
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