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Band 4

You have missed some important papers accidently in a taxi. Write a letter to the manager of the Taxi company. In your letter: Give the details of your journey Explain why those papers are important for you Suggest what can the manager do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Krushang Patel a student at
waterloo university
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, the reason for
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 letter is to enquire about a missing file I left in one of your
taxi
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, Recently I booked a taxi from your company and
teaveled
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travelled
 from downtown
kitchener
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waterloo university, on 5th of January, around 10 AM, I was carrying multiple files and as I was in a hurry I forgot to take all of my files with me and left one in the back of the taxi. I have a presentation later
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 week and I was hoping that you could look into
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 matter and help me find the missing folder. I would greatly appreciate any
assitance
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assistance
 on your behalf. looking forward to your reply, Yours Faithful, Krushang Patel

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Make sure to include a specific description of the missing file, such as its contents or appearance, to help the manager identify it more easily.
coherence and cohesion
Check for spelling errors such as 'teaveled' and 'assitance.' Correct spelling enhances clarity and professionalism.
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Consider adding a brief concluding statement summarizing your request, reinforcing the importance of the documents to you.
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The letter has a polite tone and conveys urgency effectively, which is important in this context.
coherence and cohesion
The initial greeting and the sign-off are appropriate for a formal letter, demonstrating good adherence to letter-writing conventions.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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