The line graph gives information about the percentage of woman aged 15-64 in employment between 2003 and 2009.

The line graph illustrates the proportion of female workers

who

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aged 15-64 in five countries (Canada, Turkey,

Iceland

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, Germany, Chile) from 2003 to 2009.

Overall

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,

Iceland

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consistently had the highest rate of women

employmet

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employment

,

while

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Turkey had the lowest throughout the period.

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, all countries showed an upward trend, except

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for

Iceland

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, which experienced a slight decrease

at the end

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of the period. In 2003, the figures

of

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women workers

was

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dominated

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in

Iceland

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at just above 80% before

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showing

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a gradual decline to just under 80%

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of the

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.

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Similarly

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Canada and Germany followed, as Canada started at above 70% and

mainatained

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maintained

relatively stable throughout the

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, compared to, Germany which

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a significant rise to reach 65% in 2009.

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, Chile

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began

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at 35% and

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rose steadily to end the

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with 40%.

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, Turkey had the lowest level during

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