The diagram below shows how soft cheese is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how soft cheese is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how soft cheese is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture illustrates the step-by-step production of soft cheese.
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, the process encompasses several stages. It commences with mixing the water and milk and concludes with the heating procedure. The workflow begins with the milk and water mixture. Once they are mixed completely, it is
then
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left
for cooling
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at 5
degrees
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for two
hours
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transforms the liquid
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a thick liquid. Afterwards, salt is added before the fermentation stage. In the
fermantation
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fermentation
phase, the cold ingredients are cooked at 35
degrees
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for 6
hours
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.
This
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fermantation
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fermentation
process is followed by
evaportation
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evaporation
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similarly
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the cooking continues but at 100
degrees
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for
eigth
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eight
eighth
hours
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.
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, it is left
for cooling
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again
for
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apply
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at 5
degrees
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for six
hours
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.
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,
this
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stage includes filtering. After the cheese mixture is cooled down, the thick liquid can be drained
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the waste water comes out by the filters and the soft cheese can be obtained.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pasteurization
  • starter culture
  • fermentation
  • rennet
  • coagulation
  • curds
  • whey
  • draining process
  • semi-solid curds
  • texture and flavor
  • cooling and packaging
  • distribution and sale
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