Do yoy agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mothematics. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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Dear Madam or Sir I am writing to you with regard to the road maintenance issue near my house. My name is Fatih Emir Yalçındağ and ı living

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Burç country. I am a student at Gaziantep University

thuse

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those

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ı need

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to school every morning at 8 o’clock but

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sometimes

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was

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late because the road

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apply

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near

zoo

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the zoo

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is closed since

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renevation

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renovation

and there was

traffic

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jam. Construction at the zoo is so loud

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and the students at the school next to the zoo

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disturbed

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situation because we

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cant study Traffic is so

jam

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who

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use

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way heaps of time late to where they will go I think if construction will

done

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in the afternoon

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of the morning maybe traffic will not jam and

issue

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will be solved Or a new path may open we want issues solved Thank you

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advance for your time and consideration Yours faithfully Fatih Emir Yalçındağ

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task achievement

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task achievement

You have addressed the task and presented your concerns regarding the road maintenance issue.

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Paragraph 1 - Introduction

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Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

163 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

holistic education
critical thinking
empathy
global citizenship
interdisciplinary
technological advancement
practical skills
cultural awareness
ethical reasoning
innovation
personal growth
diverse cultures
traditions
global citizenship
societal progress

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Fully explain your ideas

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