The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The six given pie charts illustrate the amount of water used in three major categories (industrial
use
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, agricultural
use
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and domestic
use
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) in 6 parts of the world. From an
overall
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point of view, it could be observed that in most of the reigns
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agricultural
use
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has the first place,
while
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in the remaining 2 lands, it is industrial
use
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which takes the lead.
In contrast
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, the three lands of Africa, Central and South East Asia have a similar pattern as in all of them, industrial
use
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exceeds 80% and domestic
use
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is just below a tenth. The only difference is that in South East Asia the ratio of fluid used for industrial
use
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is about 2 times more than those others (5 and 7
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).
On the other hand
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, the figures are less alike when it comes to Europe and North and South
America
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. In detail,
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in North
America
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and Europe industrial
use
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is the greatest number with just under and above 50%, in South
America
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it is Agriculture which wins
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place with an amount of 71%.
Although
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the numbers for domestic and industrial
use
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are close in Europe and North
America
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(13&15, 48&53)
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it was not the case for Africa.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words use, america with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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