The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons hwre relavant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons hwre relavant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons hwre relavant.
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destination
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of
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graduates
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from one university,
as well as
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the payements
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payements
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payments
of those who finished undergraduate degree
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in
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and worked for five years.
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, it can be seen that more than
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half of
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graduates
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work
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as
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or part-time
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.
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, the majority of
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graduates
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who graduated five years ago are paid more than 50,000$, among three types of employment(Freelance
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,
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sector
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,
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and Private
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companies
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). Looking at the data in more detail, the proportion of destination of
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graduates
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is 52% at
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work
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, followed by 15% at part-time
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and 12% at unemployed.
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, the
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of students who are not known and full-time postgraduate study is the same, 8% respectively.
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, the proportion of
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who
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as
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part-time and postgraduate study together is the smallest, 5%. Turning to the salaries, depending on the type of employment,
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into 4 sectors.
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is 25,000$ to 49,999$, the
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of freelance
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and
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government
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sector
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is 5%, with the figure
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private
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10%. The Second
sector
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represents 50,000$ to 74,999$ the
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of freelance
consultants
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and
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government
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sector
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is the same as 15%, with the
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of private
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35%, which is the highest proportion in private
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. The third
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is 75,000$ to 99,999$ the percentages of
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freelancers
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,
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government
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the government
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sector
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and private
companies
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are 40%, 30% and 25%. In
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last
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sector
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, 40% of freelancer
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, 50% of
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government
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the government
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sector
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and 30% of private
companies
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workers are paid more than 100,000$.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words anthropology, graduates, work, consultants, government, sector, companies, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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