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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the information regarding the
production
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 levels of main
energy
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 sources in the UK from 1981 to 2000.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that the
energy
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production
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 from
petroleum
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 fluctuated throughout the period,
while
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 the
production
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 from coal declined and the natural gas
inclined
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increased
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 by the end of the time period. The highest level of
energy
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 was produced from
petroleum
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. By observing the chart it can be seen from the line graph that in 1981, almost 90
units
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 were produced from
petroleum
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 which surged
upto
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up to
 140
units
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 in 1984 and
remaied
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remained
 stable for the next three years. After 1986,
energy
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 from
petroleum
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 began to decrease and reached 100
units
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 in 1990.
Whilist
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Whilst
, in the next decade,
petroleum
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 usage increased
over
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by over
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 140
units
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. Probing ahead, 80
units
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 were produced from coal in 1981, which decreased by 20
units
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 in 1986 and tended to decline for the remaining period.
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, the
production
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 of
energy
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 from natural gas was 40
units
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 in the initial year, which slightly surged up to 100
units
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 in 2000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, energy, petroleum, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "surged" was used 2 times.
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