The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram shows procedures for generating
electricity
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by using geothermal energy, a type of geological power. In the initial stage, the cold
water
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is pumped 4.5 kilometres down to the injection well, and
then
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it goes through a geothermal zone mainly made of hot rocks where the
water
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is heated up.
Following
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this
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, the heated
water
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is transported into the production well to pump up to the condenser for
further
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process
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processing
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. In the following stage, the hot
water
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transfer
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transfers
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to steam in the condenser, which can lead to the rotation of the turbine,
thus
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powering the generator to produce
electricity
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. In the final step, the produced
electricity
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is transported to the transmission equipment,
where
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which
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can transmit power to different places for use.
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, the geothermal
electricity
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production process consists of five stages which
begins
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begin
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with pumping down the cold
water
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to injection
well
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wells
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and
ends
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end
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with transmitting energy out by professional facilities for various
use
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uses
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.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • renewable source
  • sustainable
  • drilling wells
  • hot water and steam
  • drive turbines
  • generate electricity
  • conversion
  • cooling process
  • re-injected
  • efficiency
  • environmental impact
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