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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the changing patterns in the three types of fuel
were
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producted
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produced
 in the UK over the period of
19-years
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19 years
 starting in 1981. Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that
Petroleum
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registed
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registered
 the
hishest
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highest
 figures out of
three
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the three
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group
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examinated
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examined
.
Furthermore
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, the number of
Petroleum
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 and Natural gas experienced an increase trend
while
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 the Coal was downed over the period shown. In 1981,
Petroleum
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 was produced at around 90 and climbed significantly to 140 in 1986.
Although
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 the production of
petroleum
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 was downed to 100
but
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it rose quickly again and hit the highest figure at approximately 140 in 2000.
The
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 similar trend was seen in the number of Natural gas when it went up quickly from nearly 39
at
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in
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 1981 to 100
at
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 2000 throughout the period shown.
In contrast
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,
an
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rapic
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rapid
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 upward trend was seen in the production levels of Coal from 80 in 1981 to the lowest figure
at
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 2000 roughly 39.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words petroleum with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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