H You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about: what course are you doing now why you are not satisfied with that course what course you would like to change to.

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Dear college director, I am a student who

study

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at your college. I am studying

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IT technologies 4 V

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at the moment. The reason why I am writing

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letter to you

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I want to change my

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to another

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. Because of that, I

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this

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course

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. One of the reasons

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course

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course

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plenty of information about new technologies and IT.

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why, we have no opportunity to

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our knowledge.

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that

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, There are not many

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in the IT room and they are a bit old.

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, I want to attend different

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competition

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, I do not socialize with teachers or

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coursemates.

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between

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and me.So I decide to change in Programming technology.I believe that you respect

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my decision. Thank you for your attention to

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letter. I look forward to receiving a prompt reply

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your earliest

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. Yours sincerely Jessica Alba.

uluga2002Sat Feb 15 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph has a clear main idea and supports that idea with relevant details.

task achievement

Be careful with sentence structure and grammar to improve clarity and professionalism of your letter.

task achievement

The purpose of the letter is clearly stated, and the request for a course change is understandable.

coherence and cohesion

You have included specific reasons for wanting to change courses, which adds depth to your request.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

168 words

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