There is a problems related to the shop in your community.you reported it several times,but it was not solved.write a letter to the manager.

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Dear sir I am writing

this

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letter to complain about the horrible situation of the

store

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in our community. I was searching

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for a

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shop

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to rent a long time ago because

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wanted to

pen

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visit

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a grocery

store

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related to

this

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shop

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two days ago.but when

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come

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came

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to the

shop

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,the

shop

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was

tragic

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in tragic

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condition.

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saw

this

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store

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in a completely different way online.

there

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There

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are many

trashes

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trash

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,useless boxes,

cardboards

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cardboard

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and other things.the

shop

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needed to

repaired

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be repaired

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because

thre

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there

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was

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a fungal attack on the bottom part of the door and the windows are broken,the roof in unusable condition.

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we repeated requests to the local authorities to repair the

shop

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,they

ignore

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ignored

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our appeal. So,

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have no choice but to write to you.I request you to repair the

store

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at the earliest. Yours sincerely, Billura

uluga2002Sun Feb 16 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Try to use more precise vocabulary to describe the situation of the shop and your requests.

task achievement

Ensure that there are no grammatical errors, such as 'pen' instead of 'open' and 'thre' instead of 'there'.

task achievement

You clearly state the problem and your request, which is essential for a complaint letter.

coherence and cohesion

The structure of your letter is relatively clear, with an introduction and conclusion.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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2
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

133 words

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There is a problems related to the shop in your community.you reported it several times,but it was not solved.write a letter to the manager.

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