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the chart below shows the annual rice production in 4 countries in 1995, 2005 and 2015

the chart below shows the annual rice production in 4 countries in 1995, 2005 and 2015
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The bar chart illustrates the amount of
rice
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 produced annually in four different
countries
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 from 1995 to 2015.
Overall
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,
Country
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 A had the highest
rice
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 production throughout the years.
Country
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 B showed steady growth for a time. Meanwhile,
Countries
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C
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 and D experienced little change, with
Country
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C
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 remaining stable and
Country
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 D only increasing slightly.
Countries
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 A and B exhibited consistently higher figures. Regarding
Country
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 A, the rate of
rice
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 production started at 45
million
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 tons in 1995, a figure which
then
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 saw gradual increases to 50
million
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 during the next two decades. When it comes to
Country
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 B, the figure increased sharply from 35
million
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 to 45
million
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 between 1995 and 2005, followed by a noticeable fall to 42
million
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 in 2015.
By contrast
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, the figures for
Countries
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C
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 and D were smaller than the remaining categories. In
Country
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C
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,
the
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rice
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 production remained the same at 5
million
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 at the beginning and end of the given 20 years, with only a small significant increase in 2005.
Country
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 D, which had the smallest numbers, experienced stability at 2.5
million
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 tons from 1995 to 2005, followed by a doubling to 5
million
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 by the end of the observed period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words rice, countries, country, c, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 3 times.
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