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The tables below give information about sales of fair trade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relavent.

The tables below give information about sales of fair trade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relavent.
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The tables display
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 information about fair trade-labeled coffee and
bananas
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 in five different European countries in 1999 and 2004.
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, the data
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sales
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similiar
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 which was Switzerland as the country with the highest
sales
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 of
banana
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, the same pattern of those years
occured
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Sweden
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known
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 as the country with the lowest
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 of coffee. In 1999, Switzerland
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sold coffee and
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 with the highest achievement about 3 and 15
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millions
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euros
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, respectively.
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,
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 experienced the lowest
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coffe
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coffee
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0.8
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 in the same year. Belgium has
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Sweden
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 the smallest number of
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bananas
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sales
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 country obtained 0.6
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 on that figure. In 2004, the changes happened and showed different data compared the 5 years ago. The
coffe's
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United
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 Kingdom increased became 20
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that
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established
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its
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 as the top in
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 category. The top
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sales
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was
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 still the same as
Switzerland
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addresed
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addressed
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millions
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Sweden
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same
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 pattern as the lowest
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, Denmark has
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sales
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 1999 with only got 0.9
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as
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the lowest
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 of
bananas
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.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, bananas, sweden, millions, euros with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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