The charts below show the proportion of people’s total spending in a particular European country was spent on different commodities and services in 1958 and in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main featureand make comparisons where relevant

The pie chart

compare

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compares

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people's spending on various commodities and services in the year 1958 and in 2008. In the year 1958,

majority

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the majority

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of spending was on clothing, followed by housing with 22%.

However

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in 2008, 32% of total

earning

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earnings

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used

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were used

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for housing and

clothings

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clothing

items of clothing

articles of clothing

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expenses reduced to 12% of total spending. Individuals spending

for

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on

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entertainment displayed a similar percentage in both the years with 18% and 16%.

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contrast

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contrast,

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expenditure on foods and luxury goods increased,

whereas

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travel and transport declined when comparing 1958 to 2008. It is clear from the chart that, citizens

prioritize

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prioritised

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clothing and housing in the year 1958,

where as

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whereas

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in 2008, more focus

is

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was

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on housing and luxury goods and food.