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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts depict
portion
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the portion
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 of water consumption for industrial, agricultural, and domestic purposes in six
continent
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continents
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 of the world: North
America
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, South
America
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,
Europe
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,
Africa
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, Central
Asia
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, and South East
Asia
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.
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, in four areas (South
America
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,
Africa
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, Central
Asia
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, South East
Asia
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) a lot  of
amout
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amount
 of water is used in irrigation in Agricultural,
while
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 in North
America
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 and
Europe
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 H2O is consumed more in Industrial
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.  Agricultural
use
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 dominates in
Africa
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, Central
Asia
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, and South East
Asia
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, with 84%, 88%, and 81% respectively. Industrial
use
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 is minimal in these regions, ranging from 5% in
Africa
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 to 12% in South East
Asia
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. Domestic
use
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 is
also
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 relatively low, with the highest being 9% in
Africa
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. South
America
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 shows a more balanced distribution, with agricultural
use
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 at 71%, industrial
use
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 at 10%, and domestic
use
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 at 19%.
In contrast
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 , in North
America
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 and
Europe
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, industrial
use
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 accounts for the largest proportion of water consumption, at 48% and 53% respectively. Agricultural
use
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 is significant in
Europe
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 at 32%, but lower in North
America
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 at 39%. Domestic
use
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 is relatively low in both regions, at 13% in North
America
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 and 15% in
Europe
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words america, europe, africa, asia, use with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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