The diagrams below show how an office building looks at present and the plan for its future development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show how an office building looks at present and the plan for its future development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show how an office building looks at present and the plan for its future development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given building layout demonstrates how the office is planned to be modernised in future.
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, it is clear to notice that both grass areas will be converted into common areas and at the same time the cafeteria which includes a kitchen and canteen will be replaced by new office rooms because of extending reception. In detail, the reception area is planned to be replaced from the right part of the floor to the centre
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of some office rooms. The hallway will be extended to the right balcony which will be covered and redeveloped to a restroom. As regards the kitchen and buffet, it will be removed so that it will be possible to replace offices from the centre of the floor. The left wing of the
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will be modernised to the outdoor collaborative space.
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the majority
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will be changed, the stockroom will remain in the same place.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • current layout
  • future development
  • architectural style
  • structural enhancements
  • functional improvements
  • modernization
  • space requirements
  • safety regulations
  • redevelopment
  • capacity
  • aesthetic appeal
  • facilities
  • office space
  • infrastructure
  • sustainability
  • eco-friendly
  • accessibility
  • renovation
  • expansion
  • upgrade
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