You have read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centre in your country all look very similar to each other.you don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper.inyour letter. Say which pointsin the article you agree with. Explain ways in which your town centre is different from most othet town centres. Offer to give guide tour to the writer of the article.

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Dear Sir, madam I am writing

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letter regarding your recent article in Times zone about my

country

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that says some similarities all over the city centres. I have read

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article about my

country

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describe

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describing

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some similarities

about

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the food chain industry like MC

Donlad

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Donald

,KFC and many which

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are

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true as it is all designed in

same

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way.

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, as far as I

concerned

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that

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the article

Says

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that the historical buildings located in my area

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different Locations are very Similar to each other which is not true as all the buildings are designed by different

archchitects

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architects

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, there are too famous buildings

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the city centre and attracting more tourism which is unique from other town centres.

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I am working as a tour guide in my tour guide in different cities around my

country

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.I would love to give you a free visit to different parts of my

country

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next month. I am hoping for an optimistic response from your side. yours sincerely . Nisha

prabhatwal094Sun Feb 23 2025

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Coherence and Cohesion

Make sure to maintain proper sentence structure and grammar throughout your letter to enhance clarity.

Task Achievement

Elaborate more on the unique aspects of your town center to strengthen your argument.

Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure there is a clear purpose stated in your closing remarks to make it more effective.

Task Achievement

You successfully expressed your willingness to give a tour, which adds a personal touch to your letter.

Coherence and Cohesion

Your introduction clearly states the reason for writing, which is essential for a letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

172 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

town centre
similarities
unique
architectural features
community events
local markets
cultural identity
artisanal shops
distinctive
guided tour
historic buildings
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