The graphs below show the different reasons of two group of students to choose Dorrifod University Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and mae comparisons with relevant.

The graphs below show the different reasons of two group of students to choose Dorrifod University Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and mae comparisons with relevant.
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The graphs illustrate the variety of factors which are taken into consideration by two age groups of youth before they choose Darrifod
University
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.
It is clear that
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the most principal reasons for
the
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both groups are
short
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distance to their homes and the variety of courses offered.
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, younger people pay more attention to the opportunities of entertaining themselves,
whereas
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more mature ones consider future perspectives,
such
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as
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of the
university
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to industry,
as well as
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the reputation of
teaching
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the teaching
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staff. Focusing first on the most significant reasons, about 35% of students at the age of 18 to 24 preferred Dorrifod
University
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because it is close to their homes and because of the variety of courses it offers,
whereas
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for those over 25, the corresponding figures are nearly 40% and 25%. Notably, 20% of the latest student group,
also
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take into account the
university
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's relation to industry. As for the remaining reasons, about 10% and 15% of youth
at
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the
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age of between 18 and 24, pick the educational establishment because of the opportunity to study abroad as part of
course
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the course
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and because of facilities on campus,
while
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only less than 5% of older students consider these as important aspects.
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, over 10% of them pay attention to the reputation of teaching staff.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words university with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graphs
  • reasons
  • choose
  • Dorrifod University
  • summarize
  • information
  • selecting
  • reporting
  • main features
  • make comparisons
  • relevant
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