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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph illustrates the
production
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 levels of the main kinds of fuel
such
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 as
petroleum
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, coal and natural gas in the UK between 1981 and 2000.
Overall
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, natural gas saw
steadily
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a steadily
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 upward trend.
In contrast
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,
petroleum
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 and coal's trends were fluctuating during estimated years.
In addition
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, even though
coal
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the coal
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production
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 level fluctuated, it faced
decline
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a decline
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 by the end. In 1981,
the
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apply
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petroleum
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production
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 was around 85
energy
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unit
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units
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,
then
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 it rocked up to 140
energy
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unit
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units
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, which after remained steady. It dipped and in the end it
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last
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lasted
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 140
energy
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unit
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units
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. If
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petroleum
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the petroleum
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 trend was upward, the coal seemed
opposite
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the opposite
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. It started with 80 and collapsed in 1983. Even though
,
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apply
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 it leveled off by 60
energy
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unit
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units
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, it saw
steady
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a steady
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 decline in its
production
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. Meanwhile, natural gas witnessed only
positive
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the positive
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 side. It was static with around 40
energy
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unit
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units
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 till' 1990,
then
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 it rose up to 80, after
small
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a small
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 stop it again
was increasing
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increased
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 up to around 100 in the end becoming second in
this
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 group, which is just doubled
than
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that
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 at the start

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, petroleum, energy, unit with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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