The graph below shows percentages of types of waste that were recycled in a town between 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart reveals the recycled percentage of distinct waste types - plastic,
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, paper and metal - in the year
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2000, 2005 and 2010, respectively.
Overall
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rate had grown steadily during the decade regardless of the type, reaching
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peak in 2010.
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, metal maintained its leading position throughout the period, outpacing its counterparts as the most frequently recycled material. From 2000 to 2005, plastic, paper, and metal experienced
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upward trajectory, with metal rising from 12
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to nearly 30
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, surpassing others' growing rate.
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,
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witnessed a
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decrease,
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arriving
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lowest point
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11
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by 2005. In 2010, figures in all categories had
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over 10
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comparing
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to 2005, with
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demonstrating
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largest growth, surging to
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highest
point at around 35
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. To be specific, metal ranked first at 40
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, with
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, paper and plastic following closely at 35, 29 and 25
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, correspondingly.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cans, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Recycling rates
  • Type of waste
  • Decade
  • Increase / Decrease
  • Trends
  • Fluctuation
  • Comparison
  • Significant change
  • Observation
  • Underlying factors
  • Technological influences
  • Environmental impact
  • Societal influence
  • Waste management policies
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