The maps below show a residential area with a park and playground in 2016 and the proposed changes for 2025 to make it safer for families and children

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information about the mapping of a neighbourhood's recreational areas in 2016 and its proposal of improvement for 2025. the following essay will

sumarize

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summarise

and

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report

the most significant changes.

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, it is clearly observed that the three main areas: southwest, southeast and northeast will be extended, most of the areas will be just modified with the exception of the new addition of a

play ground

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and a path. The most significant planned

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change

is the implementation of a

play ground

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in the southeast corner where it

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to be Flowers beds. both gates, the west and

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gates will be

remobed

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removed

, the paths

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stretched

to expand corners' sectors,

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additionally

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East path will be created.

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will give the park a refined and

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divitions

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divisions

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remmaining

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sectors are planned to just have some additions;

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the North-east section will keep its trees and add only

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picnic

area

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like chairs, desks and

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. In the South-west section that

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pond

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a bench will be added,

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the flowers will be replaced

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bushes.

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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

180 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

residential area
park
playground
proposed changes
safety
families
children
layout
features
concerns
green spaces
sidewalks
lighting
accessibility
impact
community
outdoor activities
social interaction
property values
disruption
construction
residents

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The maps below show a residential area with a park and playground in 2016 and the proposed changes for 2025 to make it safer for families and children

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