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The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.

The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.
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The given bar charts compare two reasons for
study
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, separated by different
age
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 groups, and the percentage of support these
students
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 received—
such
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 as time off and help with fees from employers—
also
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 divided into five different
age
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 groups.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the number of
students
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 studying for a career is declining with
age
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.
Moreover
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, the amount of support is decreasing with
age
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 as well.
On the other hand
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, the number of
people
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 studying for interest is dramatically increasing.
According to
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 the given information, 80% of
people
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 under the
age
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 of 26
study
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 because of their career,
while
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 only 10% of them choose personal interest.
However
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, among
students
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 who are over 49, it is common to
study
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 for their own interest—70%—
whereas
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 the percentage of
students
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 who
study
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 for career reasons is just under 20%. The percentage of reasons for studying equalised only in
people
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 between 40 and 49. Getting back to the details, the most support was gained by
students
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 under 26, which is slightly above 70%,
while
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 the least help was gained by
people
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 who are between 30 and 39 and showed nearly 34% which is almost two times less than in the younger group.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words study, age, students, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Lifelong learning
  • Professional development
  • Adult education
  • Career advancement
  • Personal enrichment
  • Academic pursuits
  • Upskilling
  • Reskilling
  • Educational attainment
  • Tuition reimbursement
  • Flexible work arrangements
  • Work-study balance
  • Financial assistance
  • Professional growth
  • Study leave
  • Employee retention
  • Workforce development
  • Time management
  • Self-improvement
  • Motivational factors
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